Ji Kimmet
Friday, August 12, 2011
Could you comment/critique my poem please?
I like the inclusion of Chocolate, and perhaps it's a metaphor, but enjoyed it as a lead in for the rest of the piece. I enjoyed too, the last stanza, which causes me to know, none of us are truly ever alone. Good write young lady.
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