Please critique this poem I wrote called "Sisyphus the Dragon-Fly" ? I worked really hard on it.?

This is absolutely amazing!! I would leave it just as is. For it is your own work and even though some say it might be to "deep" however i disagree. Oftentimes you can't obtain the full grasp of beautiful poetry in the first reading. You may have to read it a few times to seize all of the extensive details. Look at Paradise Lost by John Milton, his verses are elegant and particularly intricate. Leave it as it is.